The Notebook Part 1 Collaboration With White Sage

*From the day your eyes threw a spell on me, i became yours 
*You rejected me many times, but dear, I never gave up , 
*I knew that it's our destiny to be for each other, I was sure 
*you were too rich and I was too poor 
*but that couldn't stop me from loving, oh how I pine 
*Time by Time, your heart started to lay down next to mine 
*We fell in love so hard , with so much sweet intoxicating passion , our love was so divine 
*Your mother built high sloppy mountains between us 
*Mountains that she thought we won't be able to climb, because I was a mere country boy, 
*So I let go of you , not 'cause I was a quitter , not 'cause my desires came less, no
*I was leaving to make a better life for you and me, so- 
*there will be a garden for you and me to live in tomorrow 
*You left town so soon and I never had the chance to apologize for our last fight , never had the chance to tell you how much I love you for one last time 
*Yes I never had the chance to say goodbye, 
*Sent you so many love letters but never saw a reply 
*With a blink of an eye I saw- 
*Your moon face and then you disappeared 
*Thought you forgot about me, forgot my love and moved on 
*Searched for you , lost hope but my love-tamed heart felt you so near 
*And absolutely near you were, but your heart wasn't pumping for me , you were with a fancy fiancee that your mother liked over there 
*I've bought the house of our dreams, our heaven, the one we made love in , it was so pretty just like we imagined it would be 
*And in my heart, I strongly wished you could see 
*Before your wedding, a fortune for our undisputable love, you saw my picture in the news paper and your heart started to scream 
*Ran away so fast from your nightmare, and you came to my lap for another warm hold, with passion that beam 
*You refreshed your love for me, and my love never went any less, only stronger as burning flames 
*We made love and talked for hours - 
*you knew that our hearts still belong to each other, our lips pine with such power 
*And our desires climbed up the roof 
*You thought I haven't sent you anything not even a little word , without knowing that your mom deprived you from the 337 letters that I've wrote to you 
*You were so angry but I've calmed you down and held you tight , told you the truth

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 1/14/2016 8:15:00 AM
Dalia, I just told white sage, this is the best collab I have seen here. NO JOKE, this movie is my all time fav movie! You can ask anyone, I cry everytime. So sweet how he read the journals to her...I love them as a couple. So much passion for eachother..well done, very grateful you two shared this wonderful collab...-luloo *well done* *smiles*
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Dalia Shahein
Date: 1/17/2016 11:57:00 AM
Thank you so much my dear for ur sweet sweet comment , I admire this movie too and I cry every time I watched it , we appreciate your kindness and ur delightful visit , hugs / / :)
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White Sage
Date: 1/14/2016 12:22:00 PM
thanks so much Laura, the film's so mesmerizing and am glad i had a collaboration with Dalia, we expect more in the future, we appreciate your comment
Date: 1/13/2016 1:37:00 PM
excellent......nice abd precise.
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Dalia Shahein
Date: 1/17/2016 11:54:00 AM
Thank you so much my dear for ur sweet comment, hugs / / :)
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White Sage
Date: 1/13/2016 2:13:00 PM
thanks dear legend...I and Dalia really do appreciate your comment...best wishes
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White Sage
Date: 1/13/2016 2:11:00 PM
thanks dear legend...I and Dalia really do appreciate your comment...best wishes
Date: 1/12/2016 5:23:00 PM
Nothing can deny or destroy the truth of love, and oh how this poem reinforces love's invincibility with passionate tears and kisses...love letters are so damn magical aren't they...this collaboration really lights my heart up Dalia and White Sage...J.A.B. A FAV!!
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Dalia Shahein
Date: 1/17/2016 11:53:00 AM
Thank you so much my dear for ur sweet sweet comment and ur delightful visit, it's much appreciated, hugs / / :)
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White Sage
Date: 1/13/2016 7:10:00 AM
Thanks Justin...we are glad you like it, we really appreciate your comment
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