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The Notebook Part 1 a Collaboration With Dalia Shahein

*From the day your eyes threw a spell on me, i became yours *You rejected me many times, but dear, I never gave up , *I knew that it's our destiny to be for each other, I was sure *you were too rich and I was too poor *but that couldn't stop me from loving, oh how I pine *Time by Time, your heart started to lay down next to mine *We fell in love so hard , with so much sweet intoxicating passion , our love was so divine *Your mother built high sloppy mountains between us *Mountains that she thought we won't be able to climb, because I was a mere country boy, *So I let go of you , not 'cause I was a quitter , not 'cause my desires came less, no *I was leaving to make a better life for you and me, so- *there will be a garden for you and me to live in tomorrow *You left town so soon and I never had the chance to apologize for our last fight , never had the chance to tell you how much I love you for one last time *Yes I never had the chance to say goodbye, *Sent you so many love letters but never saw a reply *With a blink of an eye I saw- *Your moon face and then you disappeared *Thought you forgot about me, forgot my love and moved on *Searched for you , lost hope but my love-tamed heart felt you so near *And absolutely near you were, but your heart wasn't pumping for me , you were with a fancy fiancee that your mother liked over there *I've bought the house of our dreams, our heaven, the one we made love in , it was so pretty just like we imagined it would be *And in my heart, I strongly wished you could see *Before your wedding, a fortune for our undisputable love, you saw my picture in the news paper and your heart started to scream *Ran away so fast from your nightmare, and you came to my lap for another warm hold, with passion that beam *You refreshed your love for me, and my love never went any less, only stronger as burning flames *We made love and talked for hours - *you knew that our hearts still belong to each other, our lips pine with such power *And our desires climbed up the roof *You thought I haven't sent you anything not even a little word , without knowing that your mom deprived you from the 337 letters that I've wrote to you *You were so angry but I've calmed you down and held you tight , told you the truth

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 1/17/2016 10:05:00 AM
Wonderful sentiments...what a sweet write. Congrats on a successful collaboration! PS. What's the asterisk for? :-)
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White Sage
Date: 1/17/2016 2:33:00 PM
thanks so much Kim, we appreciate your lovely comment...the asterisks occurred while mailing, the marquee wasn't so good, so we denoted new lines with asterisks...
Date: 1/14/2016 4:19:00 PM
Excellent pen White Sage! I love this very romantic movie:) Very nice collaboration well done!A7! Wishing you a very lovely weekend! In his light God bless you! :) D.
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Date: 1/14/2016 6:11:00 PM
thanks Dorian...we really do appreciate your comment
Date: 1/14/2016 8:12:00 AM
So romantic white sage, probably the best collab I've seen here...*smiles*!!!
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Date: 1/14/2016 12:13:00 PM
thanks Laura...
Date: 1/14/2016 4:55:00 AM
very nice.....loving is nt an easy thing.
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Date: 1/14/2016 11:46:00 AM
it's easy, times just do come...thanks dear Legend
Date: 1/13/2016 9:10:00 AM
White Sage, you two have penned a beautiful and romantic write. It had my full attention from start to finish. I love happy endings. Well done-Alexis 7
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Date: 1/13/2016 9:30:00 AM
thanks Alexis, our best wishes to you dear one
Date: 1/12/2016 11:01:00 AM
I'm so pleased and honored by this beautiful collaboration with you my dear , hope to have more in the future, hugs / / :) dalia
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Date: 1/12/2016 2:22:00 PM
thanks Dalia, you gave it such a nice thought, the portrait was made by you, and your potential made it beautiful, am glad I had a collaboration with you dear one

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