The Note

childhood memories
rejuvenating life
thinking of a time
with no grief or strife

back in that one summer
when you had a secret
that little boy who said, you're cute
and you'd promised him you'd keep it

he gave you a note
with writing in the page
that said, I think you're really swell
and just the perfect age

and then you noticed
in the corner of the page
is your name in a heart
and then a smiley face

you think for a minute
before you do reply
and write something back
and then you let it fly

he gazes at you and he smiles
and then he turns away
to read that note you gave him
that told him he would pay

you didn't like this little boy
for he was kind of creepy
he stares at you all day long
plus his name was "creepy"

you didn't ever trust him
because of his odd name
because he would follow you
until you'd want to mame

you told him you don't like him
but he wont go away
until you say you love him
and tell him he should stay

but that will never happen
because it isn't true
so you say that he should leave
and he tries to mame you

the moral of this story
is always tell the truth
because if that doesn't happen
you might punch out a tooth

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 10/23/2014 2:38:00 PM
I love the flow of this piece written here...And yes We all should tell the truth...excellent write! Welcome to the Soup Family...INK-U-SCRIPT
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