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The Note

childhood memories rejuvenating life thinking of a time with no grief or strife back in that one summer when you had a secret that little boy who said, you're cute and you'd promised him you'd keep it he gave you a note with writing in the page that said, I think you're really swell and just the perfect age and then you noticed in the corner of the page is your name in a heart and then a smiley face you think for a minute before you do reply and write something back and then you let it fly he gazes at you and he smiles and then he turns away to read that note you gave him that told him he would pay you didn't like this little boy for he was kind of creepy he stares at you all day long plus his name was "creepy" you didn't ever trust him because of his odd name because he would follow you until you'd want to mame you told him you don't like him but he wont go away until you say you love him and tell him he should stay but that will never happen because it isn't true so you say that he should leave and he tries to mame you the moral of this story is always tell the truth because if that doesn't happen you might punch out a tooth

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Date: 10/23/2014 2:38:00 PM
I love the flow of this piece written here...And yes We all should tell the truth...excellent write! Welcome to the Soup Family...INK-U-SCRIPT
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