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The Not So Original Monoku Challenge

The not so original monoku challenge Captured in time, allures pelican's voyage, lands up into icon. Written April 2nd, 2016 For contest by Timothy hicks

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/10/2016 10:49:00 PM

Dr Upma, Congrats on your Not So Original Monoku Challenge" LINDA

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/7/2016 8:05:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Upma!

Laura Leiser

Date: 4/7/2016 3:58:00 PM

Very creative take on this, Dr. Upma! Congrats on your fine win :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/7/2016 3:24:00 PM

Your poem was awesome, creative and unique. You did a wonderful job with the topic “The Not So Original Monoku Challenge” ..Congratulations on your placement..Sara ..Thanks for dropping by with congrats..

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 4/7/2016 2:55:00 PM

Congratulations Dr. Sharma

Paul Callus

Date: 4/7/2016 12:59:00 PM

I like this monoku, Upma, especially the end part. Congratulations on this fine win! ~ Regards // paul

Sandra Haight

Date: 4/7/2016 12:01:00 PM

Very clever take on the theme, Dr. Upma. Congratulations on your placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra

Joseph May

Date: 4/7/2016 11:48:00 AM

Congrats on your win Dr Upma

Hansteven Selfa

Date: 4/7/2016 9:25:00 AM

That's what I like about you Dr. Upma! You write great poems in any form! Congratulations on your spectacular win! I hope to see more of your works in the future! :) -HANS

Janice Canerdy

Date: 4/7/2016 7:56:00 AM

Good job--interesting take on the prompt. Congratulations on your win. Janice

Timothy Hicks

Date: 4/7/2016 2:46:00 AM

Assuming this was taken with a smartphone (which it was), I understand what you mean by the "icon" part. Very creative. Congrats and thanks for participating in my contest!

Jan Allison

Date: 4/4/2016 11:39:00 AM

Lovely monoku good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Aiyah Torres

Date: 4/4/2016 10:51:00 AM

a great voyage in a perfect poem! Good luck in the contest, Dr. Sharma! :)

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 4/4/2016 10:47:00 AM

allures pelican's voyage-enticing/love.