The Not So Original Monoku Challenge

The not so original monoku challenge 




Captured in time, allures pelican's voyage, lands up into icon.


Written April 2nd, 2016
For contest by Timothy hicks
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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A   Avatar
April 10, 2016 at 10:49 PM
Dr Upma, Congrats on your Not So Original Monoku Challenge" LINDA
Dietrich Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 8:05 PM
Congrats on your win, Upma!
Leiser Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 3:58 PM
Very creative take on this, Dr. Upma! Congrats on your fine win :)
Kendrick Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 3:24 PM
Your poem was awesome, creative and unique. You did a wonderful job with the topic “The Not So Original Monoku Challenge” ..Congratulations on your placement..Sara ..Thanks for dropping by with congrats..
Negron Flores Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 2:55 PM
Congratulations Dr. Sharma
Callus Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 12:59 PM
I like this monoku, Upma, especially the end part. Congratulations on this fine win! ~ Regards // paul
Haight Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 12:01 PM
Very clever take on the theme, Dr. Upma. Congratulations on your placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
May Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 11:48 AM
Congrats on your win Dr Upma
Selfa Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 9:25 AM
That's what I like about you Dr. Upma! You write great poems in any form! Congratulations on your spectacular win! I hope to see more of your works in the future! :) -HANS
Canerdy Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 7:56 AM
Good job--interesting take on the prompt. Congratulations on your win. Janice
Hicks Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 2:46 AM
Assuming this was taken with a smartphone (which it was), I understand what you mean by the "icon" part. Very creative. Congrats and thanks for participating in my contest!
Allison Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 11:39 AM
Lovely monoku good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Torres Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 10:51 AM
a great voyage in a perfect poem! Good luck in the contest, Dr. Sharma! :)
Chakrabarty Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 10:47 AM
allures pelican's voyage-enticing/love.
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