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The Not So Original Monoku Challenge

fringing striped wingspans     collapse majestically    on the rocking wharf



                                                    April 2, 2016
                                              Sonsor : Timothy Hicks

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Poet Destroyer A

April 10, 2016 at 10:50 PM

Balveen, Congrats on your Not So Original Monoku Challenge" LINDA

Balveen Cheema

April 12, 2016 at 3:18 AM

Many thanks, Linda!

Andrea Dietrich

April 7, 2016 at 8:07 PM

yes, I remember this one. Big congrats to you, Balveen. I finally looked it up and found out that word can be used many different ways, not just fringed. So you did just fine with that word!!

Balveen Cheema

April 9, 2016 at 2:40 AM

Though I changed, I still like 'fringy' better. Anyway, trivial matters and we move on. All the same, thanks Andrea! I love your sweet inputs.

Sara Kendrick

April 7, 2016 at 3:24 PM

Your poem was awesome, creative and unique. You did a wonderful job with the topic “The Not So Original Monoku Challenge” ..Congratulations on your placement..Sara

Balveen Cheema

April 9, 2016 at 2:43 AM

Sara, you're making me go overboard! Thanks & Love, dear Sara!

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

April 7, 2016 at 2:55 PM

Congratulations Balveen

Balveen Cheema

April 9, 2016 at 2:44 AM

Thanks Nayda!

Paul Callus

April 7, 2016 at 1:03 PM

You describe this picture with adequate and attractive poetic words, Balveen. Congratulations on a merited win. // paul

Balveen Cheema

April 9, 2016 at 2:45 AM

Aww Paul! You've made my day! Thanks!

Hansteven Selfa

April 7, 2016 at 9:25 AM

That's what I like about you Balveen! You write great poems in any form! Congratulations on your spectacular win! I hope to see more of your works in the future! :) -HANS

Balveen Cheema

April 7, 2016 at 11:46 AM

Thanks Hansteven!

Timothy Hicks

April 7, 2016 at 2:47 AM

Great choice of words in this ... you've captured it beautifully as "majestic" was the first word that came to my mind when looking at this photo ... and the rocking wharf is a nice touch too. Congrats and thanks for participating in my contest!

Balveen Cheema

April 7, 2016 at 5:21 AM

Thanks Timothy! After being corrected, I changed 'fringy' to 'fringing' on the very first day of my submission, thinking there might be many who think 'fringy' doesn't exist or is inappropriate. I appreciate the correction and have no regrets. But it does exist and is an adjective( Lol!). It is newly added to thesaurus and you'll find it in the urban dictionary, free dictionary,.... .So, cheer up!