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The Not So Original Monoku Challenge

the earth his love and sky his lover – still, the long face

                                   02 Apr 2016

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Poet Destroyer A

April 10, 2016 at 10:48 PM

David, I love the long face look. LOL.. unique..., Congrats on your Not So Original Monoku Challenge" LINDA

Andrea Dietrich

April 7, 2016 at 8:03 PM

haha, loved the last part!

Jan Allison

April 7, 2016 at 5:42 PM

many congrats David:-) hugs Jan xx

Laura Leiser

April 7, 2016 at 3:57 PM

Great take and humor, David! Congrats on your win :)

Sara Kendrick

April 7, 2016 at 3:22 PM

Your poem was awesome, creative and unique. You did a wonderful job with the topic “The Not So Original Monoku Challenge” ..Congratulations on your placement..Sara

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

April 7, 2016 at 2:54 PM

Congratulations David

Hansteven Selfa

April 7, 2016 at 9:25 AM

That's what I like about you David! You write great poems in any form! Congratulations on your spectacular win! I hope to see more of your works in the future! :) -HANS

Timothy Hicks

April 7, 2016 at 2:43 AM

I don't know whether to think this is really pretty or really funny ... (Bet Peli's never heard THAT one before). This is my kind of humor. Most creative. Congrats and thanks for participating in my contest!