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The Not So Original Monoku Challenge

the earth his love and sky his lover – still, the long face 02 Apr 2016

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Date: 4/10/2016 10:48:00 PM
David, I love the long face look. LOL.. unique..., Congrats on your Not So Original Monoku Challenge" LINDA
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Date: 4/7/2016 8:03:00 PM
haha, loved the last part!
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Date: 4/7/2016 5:42:00 PM
many congrats David:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/7/2016 3:57:00 PM
Great take and humor, David! Congrats on your win :)
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Date: 4/7/2016 3:22:00 PM
Your poem was awesome, creative and unique. You did a wonderful job with the topic “The Not So Original Monoku Challenge” ..Congratulations on your placement..Sara
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Date: 4/7/2016 2:54:00 PM
Congratulations David
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Date: 4/7/2016 9:25:00 AM
That's what I like about you David! You write great poems in any form! Congratulations on your spectacular win! I hope to see more of your works in the future! :) -HANS
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Date: 4/7/2016 2:43:00 AM
I don't know whether to think this is really pretty or really funny ... (Bet Peli's never heard THAT one before). This is my kind of humor. Most creative. Congrats and thanks for participating in my contest!
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Date: 4/7/2016 2:40:00 AM
Such a lovely monoku.. no wonder great win... big congrats david..
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Date: 4/3/2016 3:39:00 AM
This is lovely and creative, David; hoping to come back with congrats:) ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 4/7/2016 12:54:00 PM
...and back again...with promised congratulations!! // paul
Date: 4/2/2016 11:31:00 AM
Beautiful interpretation of the image - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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