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The Not So Original Monoku Challenge

the earth his love and sky his lover – still, the long face 02 Apr 2016

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/10/2016 10:48:00 PM

David, I love the long face look. LOL.. unique..., Congrats on your Not So Original Monoku Challenge" LINDA

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/7/2016 8:03:00 PM

haha, loved the last part!

Jan Allison

Date: 4/7/2016 5:42:00 PM

many congrats David:-) hugs Jan xx

Laura Leiser

Date: 4/7/2016 3:57:00 PM

Great take and humor, David! Congrats on your win :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/7/2016 3:22:00 PM

Your poem was awesome, creative and unique. You did a wonderful job with the topic “The Not So Original Monoku Challenge” ..Congratulations on your placement..Sara

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 4/7/2016 2:54:00 PM

Congratulations David

Hansteven Selfa

Date: 4/7/2016 9:25:00 AM

That's what I like about you David! You write great poems in any form! Congratulations on your spectacular win! I hope to see more of your works in the future! :) -HANS

Timothy Hicks

Date: 4/7/2016 2:43:00 AM

I don't know whether to think this is really pretty or really funny ... (Bet Peli's never heard THAT one before). This is my kind of humor. Most creative. Congrats and thanks for participating in my contest!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 4/7/2016 2:40:00 AM

Such a lovely monoku.. no wonder great win... big congrats david..

Paul Callus

Date: 4/3/2016 3:39:00 AM

This is lovely and creative, David; hoping to come back with congrats:) ~ Regards // paul

Paul Callus
Date: 4/7/2016 12:54:00 PM

...and back again...with promised congratulations!! // paul

Jan Allison

Date: 4/2/2016 11:31:00 AM

Beautiful interpretation of the image - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx