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The Not So Original Monoku Challenge

golden wings spread to take a sunbath in the fishing dock in a summer morning















For The Not So Original Monoku Challenge Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Timothy Hicks
Ninth Place
4-1-2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Kimathi Avatar
April 13, 2016 at 4:54 AM
Beautiful picturesque line!! Congrats Nayda, for your placement in the contest!!! ;-)
Negron Flores Avatar
April 13, 2016 at 6:01 AM
Thank you Teddy
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April 10, 2016 at 10:52 PM
Nayda, Congrats on your Not So Original Monoku Challenge" LINDA
Negron Flores Avatar
April 10, 2016 at 11:09 PM
Thank you Linda
Dietrich Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 8:11 PM
Nicely described. Congrats, Nayda.
Negron Flores Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 8:13 PM
Thank you Andrea
May Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 6:15 PM
Congrats on your win Nayda
Negron Flores Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 8:05 PM
Thank you Joseph
Leiser Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 4:05 PM
I liked this monoku a lot, Nayda. Should have placed higher in my opinion...Congrats on your win :)
Negron Flores Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 4:11 PM
Thank you Laura
Kendrick Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 3:29 PM
Your poem was awesome, creative and unique. You did a wonderful job with the topic “The Not So Original Monoku Challenge” ..Congratulations on your placement..Sara
Negron Flores Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 4:12 PM
Thank you very much Sandra
Callus Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 1:30 PM
A lovely description, Nayda; congratulations on your win! // paul
Negron Flores Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 3:28 PM
Thank you Paul
Selfa Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 9:27 AM
That's what I like about you Nayda! You write great poems in any form! Congratulations on your spectacular win! I hope to see more of your works in the future! :) -HANS
Negron Flores Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 9:29 AM
Thank you Hans
Hicks Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 2:57 AM
Beautiful and relaxing. Congrats and thanks for participating in my contest!
Negron Flores Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 6:55 AM
Thank you Timothy
A. Sharma Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 2:50 AM
And back again with big congrats on ur great win Nayda..
Negron Flores Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 6:56 AM
Thank you Dr. Sharma
Dietrich Avatar
April 2, 2016 at 4:14 PM
a nice descriptive one this is!
Negron Flores Avatar
April 2, 2016 at 6:31 PM
Thank you Andrea
A. Sharma Avatar
April 2, 2016 at 5:29 AM
Wonderful write Nayda..
Negron Flores Avatar
April 2, 2016 at 6:31 PM
Thank you Dr. Sharma
Spagnola Avatar
April 1, 2016 at 4:35 PM
Sweet-flowin, vivid one-liner :), jill
Negron Flores Avatar
April 1, 2016 at 4:47 PM
Thank you Jill
Andresen Avatar
April 1, 2016 at 3:24 PM
- A lovely line, Nayda - Luck in contest ! - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Negron Flores Avatar
April 1, 2016 at 4:46 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise.
Allison Avatar
April 1, 2016 at 3:17 PM
lovely imagery good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Negron Flores Avatar
April 1, 2016 at 4:46 PM
Thank you Jan. Hugs, Nayda
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