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The Night Star In a Garden Bed

Small white buds like stars,
Twinkling in the dark garden,
Day comes, they open.

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Daisy Meadows

Date: 9/20/2023 12:31:00 AM

A lovely description. Well done.

Fire Bird
Date: 9/20/2023 1:18:00 AM

Hi Jeanette, thanks for the comment!! - Phoenix :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/17/2023 6:36:00 PM

Dear Phoenix, a garden bed of serene beauty! Splendid imagery. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan

Fire Bird
Date: 9/17/2023 6:39:00 PM

Hi Susan, thank you for the encouraging comment! - Phoenix :)

Kenisha Shines

Date: 9/16/2023 8:15:00 AM

Beautiful poem!keep smiling :)

Fire Bird
Date: 9/16/2023 1:39:00 PM

Thanks! - Phoenix :)

Arastu Goyal

Date: 9/15/2023 3:36:00 AM

I enjoyed it! I like the image and the words used, beautiful Haiku. -AG

Fire Bird
Date: 9/16/2023 1:00:00 AM

Hi Arastu, thanks again for another encouraging comment! - Phoenix :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/14/2023 6:28:00 PM

So precious

Fire Bird
Date: 9/14/2023 6:30:00 PM

Hi Andrea, thanks! - Phoenix :)

Darrell Rose

Date: 9/13/2023 12:47:00 AM

This is a nice piece, calm and peaceful. I enjoyed the image. Darrell

Fire Bird
Date: 9/13/2023 2:07:00 AM

Hi Darrell, thanks, I was trying to create a poem that created a vivid image of a calm place or thing. - Phoenix:)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/11/2023 7:12:00 PM

Love the image, Phoenix! Light and Illumination, Gershon

Fire Bird
Date: 9/11/2023 7:21:00 PM

Hi Gershon, thanks! - Phoenix :)

The Situation

Date: 9/11/2023 2:33:00 PM

I use to have a plant. this reminds me of it. Now I miss it.

Fire Bird
Date: 9/11/2023 7:21:00 PM

I hope you get another plant. - Phoenix :)

Ink Empress

Date: 9/11/2023 6:12:00 AM

this is so stunning. I absolutely loved reading this. Especially “ white bud like stars” how creative is that. Brilliant

Fire Bird
Date: 9/11/2023 1:50:00 PM

Hi, thank you for the comment it was really high praise! - Phoenix :)

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