The Night Star In a Garden Bed

Small white buds like stars,
Twinkling in the dark garden,
Day comes, they open.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Meadows Avatar
September 20, 2023 at 12:31 AM
A lovely description. Well done.
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September 20, 2023 at 1:18 AM
Hi Jeanette, thanks for the comment!! - Phoenix :)
Ashley Avatar
September 17, 2023 at 6:36 PM
Dear Phoenix, a garden bed of serene beauty! Splendid imagery. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan
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September 17, 2023 at 6:39 PM
Hi Susan, thank you for the encouraging comment! - Phoenix :)
Shines Avatar
September 16, 2023 at 8:15 AM
Beautiful poem!keep smiling :)
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September 16, 2023 at 1:39 PM
Thanks! - Phoenix :)
Goyal Avatar
September 15, 2023 at 3:36 AM
I enjoyed it! I like the image and the words used, beautiful Haiku. -AG
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September 16, 2023 at 1:00 AM
Hi Arastu, thanks again for another encouraging comment! - Phoenix :)
Dietrich Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 6:28 PM
So precious
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September 14, 2023 at 6:30 PM
Hi Andrea, thanks! - Phoenix :)
Rose Avatar
September 13, 2023 at 12:47 AM
This is a nice piece, calm and peaceful. I enjoyed the image. Darrell
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September 13, 2023 at 2:07 AM
Hi Darrell, thanks, I was trying to create a poem that created a vivid image of a calm place or thing. - Phoenix:)
Wolf Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 7:12 PM
Love the image, Phoenix! Light and Illumination, Gershon
Bird Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 7:21 PM
Hi Gershon, thanks! - Phoenix :)
Situation Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 2:33 PM
I use to have a plant. this reminds me of it. Now I miss it.
Bird Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 7:21 PM
I hope you get another plant. - Phoenix :)
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September 11, 2023 at 6:12 AM
this is so stunning. I absolutely loved reading this. Especially “ white bud like stars” how creative is that. Brilliant
Bird Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 1:50 PM
Hi, thank you for the comment it was really high praise! - Phoenix :)
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