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The Night Sky

High above my head tonight- Stars again up there shall fight- For a place on the Heavenly seat- One to many, an impossible feat- But each lone star still keeps its dream- To have above them all a brighter gleam- To be the top, be uncontested- Jealousy in them, each now infested- But on the journey to the top- Our little star forgets to stop- And look around in the night sky- To help the stars to small to try- We all get lost in our own life- Blind to see each others strife- I plea we can all learn to stop- And help another get to the top-

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/5/2013 7:59:00 AM
Good morning, JORDAN, Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week :-) Take care, and enjoy your wonderful day. Always & Forever! **LINDA**
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Date: 7/17/2012 9:22:00 PM
A good soul emits true light from this fine piece again! Jordan...jimbo
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Date: 7/17/2012 9:11:00 PM
I enjoyed your poem, Jordan. I like the meaning of it.
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Jordan Dickinson
Date: 7/17/2012 9:14:00 PM
Thank you very much!

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