The Night Sky

the night sky

 it makes me think of so many things when i look up at the sky 

it's like when i look up so many things travel tho my mind

 it makes me think of what well happen or what well happen in the furture from now 

by looking up it makes me feel like i'm in a happy place that takes away all my pain 
and stress away 

and i think on how things in my life can be better or how i can be a better person

 i have so many plans on what i want to do as sometype of carrer 

or something but i try n try n the results i get bck is nothing

 but no matter what even tho i get nothing

 i want to at least keep trying for me to get at least something is better then 
nothing thats what alot of ppl always told me
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Brown Avatar
February 9, 2011 at 12:02 PM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Selena. I know this is a late welcome but, I have some very pressing matters going on at the present time. I hope to be back and at full speed in the next couple of weeks. Until then please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Love, Carol
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February 9, 2011 at 1:02 AM
a wonderful, reflective write! nice stuff! :) nette
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