The Night of Shrieks

I was paving towards the old banyan tree
Where the moonlight was cursed 
To these solitary paths my heart was unversed
Fear embraced and didn`t let me go free.

The hanging roots were a witch`s hair
The mournful leaves tickled my hands
And my legs ran errands
The scene created looked rare

Then when I touched the expressive stem
I was pushed to a brightly lit place
Where every creature dazzled with grace
And worn a crown of an innocent gem.
 
Still a found a love in their heart
No stains of selfishness I found
With joy and glee I was bound
An unearthly place I found just few metres apart.

I murmured," Where the hell I am, in dark beams?"
A voice replied,"Its a place where you stepped at your will recently
And you will leave soon and with a smile,decently 
Its a world you weave, its your creativity, its a world of dreams".
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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U.D Palawon  Avatar
September 12, 2016 at 8:03 AM
Congrats on your placement with this wonderful rhyme! :) Sunita
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September 11, 2016 at 5:56 PM
Lakshya, firstly welcome to the SOUP! I am delighted to meet you and this is the first poem I have read of yours, and it will not be the last :) You used enclosed rhyme perfectly, congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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September 9, 2016 at 7:42 AM
Lakshya,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT
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September 9, 2016 at 2:41 AM
Lakshya, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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