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The Night Grows Weary

The night grows weary and so do I It seems not to matter how hard I try The river's run dry Its waters need to replenish... As I fade in to their steam May they grant my last wish

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Date: 10/25/2019 8:15:00 AM
Magnificent in its simplicity. I really like it. Excellent piece Gershon. Hugs xomo
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/25/2019 1:45:00 PM
Thank you so much, Maureen. Your comments always cheer me up and bring a smile to my face. Warmest wishes, Gershon
Date: 10/25/2019 5:47:00 AM
Oh, how well your imagery captured the depths of that gray feeling - great penning and if you were truly feeling that way when you penned this gem, I hope you've managed to change your channel. A wow of a write, Gershon. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Date: 10/25/2019 1:45:00 PM
Ha, ha. Love your comment, CayCay… I actually was a wee bit weary when I wrote this. ~ Zzzzzzzzzzz
Date: 10/25/2019 1:15:00 AM
Ahhh Gershon that just sounded like a good night soupers to me!;) and what a lovely image too! As with me too good night my friend and I shall go to sleep with a smile on my face!;) thank you my friend!;)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/25/2019 1:44:00 PM
When you're smiling, Brenda, the whole world smiles with you, my dear friend. So glad I could help a wee bit. Ciao, Gershon
Date: 10/25/2019 12:09:00 AM
We all suffer those weary nights Gershon, you're not alone, I'm waiting for the rain. Tom
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/25/2019 1:43:00 PM
Tom, hope you're not still waiting for that rain. As for me, I'm too impatient. I just turn on the shower and go to sleep. LOL. Thanks, Gershon
Date: 10/24/2019 11:57:00 PM
Go to bed, sleepyhead ;) You'll feel better in the morning <3
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/25/2019 1:42:00 PM
I did, and I do---all thanks to you! :) gw

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