The Night Before

Twas the night before Christmas and what do I see
A table full of credit card bills laying before me
I wanted to make this the best Christmas ever
Did I think I'd spend this much? Never!
So I bought her a mink and some diamond rings
And lots of other sparkly things
The daughter wanted a new car to go with her cell phone
And the son came out of the basement begging for a high priced drone
Next year is going to be rough
For I don't know how I'll pay for all this stuff
This is not a happy Christmas eve
For no one thought about a gift for me

The night before poetry contest
Sponsored by : Joseph May
11/22/18

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Date: 12/12/2018 12:39:00 AM
Blessings and sincerest congratulations for your win in Joseph's fun Christmas contest, Timothy - I pray you and yours have a happy and healthy holiday season! Keep the ink flowing, my friend! :-)
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 12/12/2018 8:14:00 PM
Thank you Gregory, the same to you and yours!
Date: 12/9/2018 5:16:00 PM
Made me smile as my hubby and I haven't got gifts for eachother this year, and I've never gone into debt to pay for gifts in the past, I can understand the reason people overspend but they pay for it in so many ways over the year. Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 12/9/2018 7:47:00 PM
Thanks Jan! A free Merry Christmas to you and yours
Date: 11/26/2018 7:14:00 PM
G'day Timothy … I guess Christmas is a wonderful time, and you have put it in perspective with the aftermath - thank you Timothy - Lindsay
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 11/26/2018 9:42:00 PM
Thank you Lindsay!
Date: 11/24/2018 2:47:00 PM
"mink and some diamond rings and lots of sparkly things" I am making my list ;) Well done!
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 11/24/2018 9:16:00 PM
Thank you P. S.
Date: 11/23/2018 12:59:00 PM
Ouch - this is ringing SO TRUE to me right at this moment. I am SO cutting back this year. Great poem, Timothy.
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 11/23/2018 5:55:00 PM
Thanks. We all get to that poinf sooner or later. :)
Date: 11/23/2018 2:18:00 AM
Wow your family have expensive taste's, great one Timothy. Good luck. Tom.
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 11/23/2018 5:55:00 PM
:) They are all spoiled!
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