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Written 25th December 2025

The Night Afore Christmas

The night afore Christmas Day came our way
Twelve relatives descended, for to stay
Had to assemble several spare beds
But they did look cosy, it must be said.

A merry time was being had by all
Awaiting the moment Santa would call
The children were noisy, were kept awake
By the row that us oldies did create.

There was singing, drinking and lots to eat
Suddenly down the chimney came two feet
It was Santa come with his ho-ho-ho
Was offered a drink, but said no-no-no.

Then off up the stairs Santa Clause did run
We heard a scream, which then stilled all our fun
All wondered what on earth he could have done
To induce such an awful commotion.

It turned out that the kids had startled him
Jumping from their beds making a right dim
Santa ran down, his face glowing bright red
That was down to the children, one would guess.

Santa said that he'd been pulled, tugged and torn
The kiddies said not so, a promise sworn
They just meant to render Santa a hug
But dear Santa told them, no such luck.

Santa ran off then, faster than a flash 
His goodbye was, “I will never come back.”
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Proxenos Avatar
January 7, 2026 at 12:01 PM
Your incredible imagination runs into a joyful fun filled evening with both adults an children -Santa should be mindful not to wake the children - mmmmm tricky - excellent poetry. HUGS AND LOVE, Jennifer.
Edmonds  Avatar
January 7, 2026 at 7:07 PM
Thank you Jennifer, it must be tricky for Santa when the children can’t sleep with excitement waiting for their presents and to have a peek. Hugs and love returned… Beryl
Brotherton Avatar
January 1, 2026 at 6:33 AM
a delightful read, my friend. I hope your 2026 is filled with peace and happiness.
Edmonds  Avatar
January 1, 2026 at 9:27 AM
Thank you Jerry, I hope the year 2026 is good to you too… Beryl
Etgen-Baker Avatar
December 30, 2025 at 5:02 PM
how joyful and entertaining. Thanks for this holiday delight! Happy New Year
Edmonds  Avatar
December 30, 2025 at 5:15 PM
Thank you Sara, A Happy New Year is wished for you too… Beryl
Buhagiar Avatar
December 29, 2025 at 1:36 AM
Great imagery. Happy New Year.
Edmonds  Avatar
December 29, 2025 at 11:16 AM
Thank you Victor,. Happy New Year is wished for you too… Beryl
Poet Avatar
December 26, 2025 at 11:01 AM
Fantastic and evocative poem with stunning imagery, dear Beryl. Hearty wishes for a very happy holiday season.
Edmonds  Avatar
December 26, 2025 at 1:03 PM
Thank you Sotto. Best wishes for the New Year… Beryl
Cunningham Avatar
December 26, 2025 at 1:02 AM
Yikes, it must have been all the clamouring on the roof that woke them lol. Hope you had a lovely day Beryl. Tom
Edmonds  Avatar
December 26, 2025 at 2:42 AM
It must have been that. Thank you Tom. We had a lovely day, hope you did too… Beryl
Goldsmith Avatar
December 25, 2025 at 10:13 AM
What a creative/fun write you have here. Poor Santa has a hard job... Hahaha!!! Hugs... Hope You Have A Very Blessed Merry Christmas Day and Very Happy New Year 2026.............
Edmonds  Avatar
December 25, 2025 at 3:52 PM
Thank you Paula, poor Santa has a hard job, he can’t please all of the people all of the time, but poets can do it with rhythm and rhyme, sometimes… Beryl xx
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