The Needle

wri ting is knitting your life thro ugh a nee dle and if you sew emotion secret you’ll get nu dg ed a w e e n s y Writing is knitting through the needle if you sew emotion, secret, you'll get nudged a weensy

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/27/2025 7:35:00 AM

Creative design. I enjoyed seeing it and reading the line. Have you ever looked at the back of an embroidered piece. Sara K

Duke Beaufort

Date: 4/27/2025 6:58:00 AM

SP, I'm laughing since you felt you had to spell out the verse beneath the needle....I only saw it after a processed the needle. You're doing something very interesting....kind of explaining what we have to do to enjoy life. This is really fun to look at and ponder. Plus, poems on writing itself are very special, Making this a fav also. I know I have bias, but I love your short poems the most!! Smiles!!

Paige Hind

Date: 4/25/2025 5:40:00 PM

Very good shape poem, I am not good at these, lol