Violet King Poet Rhyme

The Need To Let Go

The need  to Let Go



As children bring their broken toys
With tears for us to mend,

I took my broken dreams to God,
Because He is my friend,.....

But instead of leaving Him in peace to work alone,
I hung around and tried to help
With ideas of my own.

At last I snatched them back,
And cried.. "How could you be so slow?"

"My child" He said,"What could I do?...
You never did let go".


Pray and Let go.

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Beata Agustin March 23, 2025 at 5:50 AM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Skat A January 22, 2016 at 7:19 PM Violet, awesome poem. A pleasure to read. Love **SKAT**

Carol Sunshine Brown February 9, 2011 at 11:07 AM Welcome to PoetrySoup Violet. I know this is a late welcome but, I have some very pressing matters going on at the present time. I hope to be back and at full speed in the next couple of weeks. Until then please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Love, Carol

Diane Christian February 8, 2011 at 4:03 AM aww nice its true some times somethings are hard to let go of but God will always hel us to be strong, and some times we have no choice to let go regardless how much it hurts, thanks for your kidn comments God bless you from diane

Poet Destroyer A February 6, 2011 at 10:38 PM a well done poem,, enjoyed,, deep,..p.d.

Judy Konos February 2, 2011 at 1:03 PM Lovely....thank you...