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The Necessity of Change

Consequence is what Ive always neglected So with regret i have been infected I knew this would happen it was expected The reason why i will never be respected So much to say iI just can't get it out I've gotta stand up because only losers pout To my desires i must do more than shout Because that is what life is all about I've got to try and pick up the pieces Put them back together sign new leases To my life i will write a new thesis That is how the disappointment in my life finally ceases I've gotta believe that my dreams can be achieved By the envious I will no longer be deceived To my burdens I will be relieved When iI finally do it, it will be because I believed

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Date: 1/19/2012 10:35:00 AM
Dylan congratulations on your win. The first four lines of your verse are so strong and real, its pretty good.
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Date: 1/18/2012 5:23:00 PM
Congratulations on being featured. I like your poem and message...never give up the dream, always believe in you! ~Trudy
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Date: 1/18/2012 2:55:00 AM
congrats on your win :)love, Sarah.
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Date: 1/17/2012 6:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Dylan. Love, Carol P.S. you can find the featured poets down the center of PoetrySoup Homepage. There are 4 pages of them this week and you can click and read and leave comments to the other poets. The poems are changed around each day giving your poem more exposure. The poems are up from Sunday to the next Sunday
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Date: 1/16/2012 11:23:00 AM
CONGRATULATIONS on the week`s winner Jack!!! :) - oxox love Anne-Lise
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