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The Nautilus

Exchanged pleasantries
Now vowed
Ensconsed
Memories

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David Archuletta

February 18, 2009 at 7:51 PM

thank you, that inspires me, sorry about your loss. my writes come from [but dont always pretain to my wrongfully adopted son, who i will never see until he grows up and wants to]

Carolyn Devonshire

February 18, 2009 at 7:45 PM

David, this takes me back to a beautiful place and time. My husband died young, and I thought of him while reading this. Your language is very thought-provoking. And thanks for reading "Feline Survivor." She lives, and she loves, for her mama. Love, Carolyn