The Nasty Games of Fate

In the path of loneliness, he so far was walking patiently There was no one to see, he was at a stage where his dreams had left him Another day was passing yet his aim was no where close to be achieved At night his lips were full of complaint and he realized that its been a mistake He wished for his mother to complaint, her arms for embrace And wondered what more he had to bare, should he give up or stand there To his right was an ocean,where as to his left was a never ending desert, He there thought about his lost fame,his aim and cursed fate for her nasty games
3 July 2018 For the contest"eight lines of fate, when you wonder if it is too late" Sponsor" Silent one"
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Bangalee Avatar
January 31, 2019 at 10:44 PM
superb writings
Roper Avatar
January 31, 2019 at 10:33 AM
What a good written poem, Faraz, deep with emotion. Hugs Eve ~`*
Lindley Avatar
July 30, 2018 at 12:05 AM
Simply a pleasure to read this one my friend. Fate(its dark hand) is a subject that I very often write about and I see the message and the sorrow so evident in your poem.. A fav...
Gauthier Avatar
July 21, 2018 at 9:52 PM
A poignant write, Faraz. Well done. Congrats on your podium finish.
Gentry Avatar
July 21, 2018 at 12:24 AM
Congratulations on your win. A dark but interesting poem about fate. Well done! :)
Dietrich Avatar
July 20, 2018 at 7:42 PM
Hey BIG congrats, Faraz!!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
July 20, 2018 at 12:21 AM
Congratulations, Faraz on your win with such an expressive poem.
Andresen Avatar
July 19, 2018 at 7:44 AM
- Many of the poems are so beautiful that they hit me in the heart ... I'm so glad I'm not going to judge ... I'm just gonna congratulate you on your beautiful win, Faraz :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
One Avatar
July 19, 2018 at 7:30 AM
Some great lines here Faraz... a deep take on the contest.. So many have had so much but lost it... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Dietrich Avatar
July 8, 2018 at 4:47 PM
A really nice entry for his contest, Faraz. I enjoyed this one a lot.
Juman Avatar
July 4, 2018 at 12:22 PM
Took me a while to read but very well written my friend
Man Avatar
July 4, 2018 at 12:51 AM
Hi Faraz.. Back from a party and wide awake. Need me a few funny, mysterious, interesting, or mellow writes to settle me into a restful state. So glad I came across your poem tonight.. just what I needed!
Riabi Dziri Avatar
July 3, 2018 at 5:51 PM
You amazed in Prose Faraz! On the path of poetry you are striding towards beauty! I liked and enjoyed your beautiful write.. Keep shining and the best of luck in the contest. Stay blessed always.
Ellison Avatar
July 3, 2018 at 5:15 PM
WOW... at a loss for appropriate words!!! Totally amazing!!! Happy Jack!
Andresen Avatar
July 3, 2018 at 12:56 PM
- Life on the dark side, Faraz - A great poem for the contest, best wishes for a big win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Onclaud Avatar
July 3, 2018 at 10:49 AM
such a stirring read... enjoyed this offering, faraz!.huggs
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