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For: Some Kind of Mystery Poetry Contest 

Sponsor: Nette Onclaud 

January 10, 2026

Us

The Mysterious Us

Mysterious are we together,
Yes, we were warned opposites attract,
Still somehow nonsensical 
That we should love the contrarinesses
Evident as north, south, east and west~
Rich & Rare as the whiskey 
You chose that first night~

Us just makes sense of the insensible.
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Dietrich Avatar
January 19, 2026 at 10:34 AM
I too ended up with my total opposite. It's not so great as your version looks, but it somehow worked. Congratulations you created a wonderful poem
Achara Avatar
January 19, 2026 at 12:46 PM
Thank you.
Goldsmith Avatar
January 11, 2026 at 10:08 AM
"The Mysterious Us" is a wonderful write Great Picture... Many say, opposites can attract. I Enjoyed Reading.... "Good Luck" I did "The Mysterious House." Have A Fun Day Writing Away..............
Achara Avatar
January 11, 2026 at 1:50 PM
Thank you. Yes. I saw your poem. Good one for sure.
Goff Avatar
January 10, 2026 at 11:40 PM
Hi Chetta, attraction can be molecular unexplainable good work!
Achara Avatar
January 11, 2026 at 6:27 AM
Thank you.
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