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When you pack a life, you pack a soul. A tapestry of memories, tales untold. Each cherished moment, tenderly whole, To be packed away, a bittersweet bold. When facing mental and literal grime. To pack for an unknown trip on time. A dance with nostalgia, a delicate art, To gather the fragments, piece by part. There is a profound stillness in the room. As blaze pictures and messages to consume. Stale, antique odors of books and art. Floats across the air as the mind starts Each item holds a story, a chapter in time, To be stated, akin to a tiny wrap, is sublime. Tokens of happiness and signs of pain, The tangible remnants of a life's refrain. The clock ticks softly, as memories unbend. Through the hands that touch, stories trend. Each object holds a piece of one's soul, A window into a life, a world once whole. The packing continues, a dance of reflection, As the past and present merge in introspection. Each item is carefully wrapped, with love and care, Preserving the essence of a life's wear and tear. After the last item, a closure grips the room. A silent trip ended, and a fresh era beckons to bloom.

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Date: 6/16/2023 7:31:00 AM
I really liked this one. It has good rhythm, rhyme and flow. The topic is spot on. Thank you for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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