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The Mysterious Key

mysterious key discovered in the attic- but it fits no locks no physical locks have embedded their mark- silver patina on bedside table it rests, inducing slumber- unlocks subconscious i walk through that door apprehensive and trembling- find my tomorrow

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Funom Makama

Date: 7/30/2019 1:08:00 PM

Your consistency makes your already wonderful craft majestic. Yet another lovely piece. This is really great..

M. L. Kiser
Date: 8/5/2019 7:23:00 PM

Thank you so much, Funom.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 7/27/2019 7:09:00 AM

Profound and beautiful Haiku dearest, M.L.K.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 7/29/2019 5:01:00 PM

Thanks so much.

Silent One

Date: 7/22/2019 4:58:00 PM

Great set of haiku..

M. L. Kiser
Date: 7/25/2019 7:10:00 PM

Many thanks.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 7/22/2019 1:21:00 PM

A thought provoking poem my friend, ..... I walk through the door ....... and find my tomorrow, rampant imagination, a fav. for me. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 7/25/2019 7:10:00 PM

Wow, thank you.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 7/22/2019 12:38:00 PM

Subconscious is a labyrinth that the non initiated may be lost. Superb writing dearest, M.L.K.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 7/25/2019 7:10:00 PM

Beautifully said. Thanks.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/22/2019 12:13:00 PM

Deep are the realms of the subconscious...Thoughtful poem, Freudian in it implications. Two thumbs up, M.L. Best wishes, gw

M. L. Kiser
Date: 7/25/2019 7:11:00 PM

Thanks so much.