Entry for The Vester Step poetry Contest: Sponsored by: Jami Patterson Date wrote 29th Jan 26 Syllable count howmanysyllables.com
A mouse tore across her toes then, a scream from her, or it as it scampered up her hose; did the boy do what was fit? She coyly looked into his deep, dark eyes he, glancing at her slightly parted thighs soft said, " Ma’am, can I be of any aid?” “It is but a mouse; do not be afraid.” “It is a rat that I most fear,” she said “with eyes so dark that see through me, attack me in my bed, sir, is that thee”? “Yes”!
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