The Mountain Top

from the mountain top
there flows spring of soothing bliss...
valley of green fields

rough edges touch sky
as the castle is shielded...
walls of protection



Olusegun Arowolo

CONTEST:"Mountains" sponsored by PD
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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July 13, 2012 at 5:26 AM
congrats olusegun on a wonderful win for a magnificent write luv.. visual beauty and beyond.. am still dewaling with head pain from a fall last week causing a concussion ..so sorry for late congrats.. ,y hubby is filling in for me right now luv..
Dietrich Avatar
July 13, 2012 at 12:47 AM
VERY nice, I really liked the second one, seeing the wall as a protected castle. Congratulations.
Kendrick Avatar
July 12, 2012 at 6:05 PM
Congrats on your win in PD contest..Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks for your congrats..Sara
Owens Avatar
July 12, 2012 at 9:53 AM
Congrats on your win in the Mountain Haiku contest...well deserved...Marty
Brown Avatar
July 12, 2012 at 7:21 AM
Congratulations on your placement in P.D.'s "Haiku Mountain Week" contest Olusegun. Love, Carol
Williams Avatar
July 12, 2012 at 7:20 AM
Olusegun congrats on your win...David
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July 12, 2012 at 4:14 AM
Congrats on your win OA
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July 11, 2012 at 7:50 PM
OA,, congratulations with your awesome win ;-) thank you for supporting my contest~ sending hugs your way~LUV*PD
Harrington Avatar
July 7, 2012 at 12:45 PM
Nicely done!
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