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The Moth Beats Its Wings

the moth beats its wings
  frantically
  now elevating
  now lowering
  apocalyptically...
the candle extinguished
  what was that
     all about

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Date: 10/4/2021 10:18:00 AM
A very creative write. Few words with a story told. Have a great/blessed day...............
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Date: 9/27/2021 8:54:00 AM
As the saying goes he was Blinded By The Light. I like moths and butterflies. Nothing God has created is without purpose. Great stuff here. God Bless, JB
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Date: 9/14/2021 4:40:00 PM
This poem has me worried, Gershon. You’ve obviously spent as much time fascinated by mothy antics as I have. How an ny man hours, worldwide, are being thus wasted? What marvels have never been invented because we’re all watching moths. ;-)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/23/2021 6:18:00 PM
Well, I'd rather spend my time with butterflies, truth be told. Take care, Terry. :) gw
Date: 9/14/2021 2:04:00 AM
Rightly or wrongly I sense an air of Icarus in your wonderful rhyme Gershon. Cheers - Gary
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/23/2021 6:17:00 PM
Icarus and the Apocalypse, I guess. Thanks Gary. ~ Gershon
Date: 9/13/2021 9:03:00 PM
A bit of humor
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/23/2021 6:17:00 PM
Bit o' Honey... Bit o' Humor. ~ Good Humor Man

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