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The Most Beautiful Avatar

The embodiment of her Avatar was a distinct manifestation, it seemed her incarnation was a marvelous creation. She became an infinite savior full of metamorphic personification, and began the most intimate challenging transformation. It was the day of her funeral when her soul began to leap out of her body; she was in a trance like in her sleep. Her appearance was nothing short of a diety full of light, to all the other Avatars she was the most beautiful sight. All the wrongs on earth she seemed to make right, she was finally filled with courage, strength and might. No longer would she be filled with heartbreak or pain, now only joy and happiness shall always remain. Her skin was all shades of the rainbow like a kaleidoscope, filled with passion for the afterlife, mercy and hope. She had this strange ability to learn how to cope, and saw the world through a tiny loving microscope. She thought it was heaven, but it was not after all, it was actually a new utopian world, then she heard a call. It was her time to teach the others about how to survive, so a lesson plan on this new world she began to contrive. She now understood all the reasons she was again alive, it was to educate with passion, for her time did arrive. All the other Avatars listened with excitement and zeal, this was the time to make this strange reality real. She craved information to expel to all who needed, as the other living Avatars begged and pleaded. As they entered this utopia she floated there and greeted, and raised up all the ones who were tormented and defeated. For she was the ultimate savior, the one who saved this world, as the darkness faded and the hate began to unfurl. Now she lives in peace and releases ease to the collection, raising up in light from this magnificent resurrection. With all of her companions she made a connection, saving all those who needed a path towards correction. She was beauty and compassion infinitely combined, she was the savior of Avatars… body, soul and mind. AVATAR CONTEST Line Gauthier December 9, 2017

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Date: 12/16/2017 5:49:00 PM
Nicely done, Laura,congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve~`*
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Date: 12/16/2017 5:58:00 AM
This is wonderful, Laura, and a lot of wor here - very cerebral and splendidly conveyed - congrats on your win, dear friend! :-) <3
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Date: 12/16/2017 9:55:00 AM
aww thank you dear Greg for all your kind words! :) luloo
Date: 12/16/2017 4:47:00 AM
Indeed congratulations on your effort. Your Avatar perfect did to all import That goodness is there for all of us. She guided those who's mind were blind Your Avatar, so true and very, very kind! Write on Laura Loo, write on, Mick
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Date: 12/16/2017 9:55:00 AM
thank you dear Mick :)-luloo
Date: 12/15/2017 11:30:00 PM
Thank you so much for your magically delightful entry. Congrats on your well deserved win, Laura. Beautiful!
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Lu Loo
Date: 12/16/2017 9:55:00 AM
wow! thank you so much for my awesome placement, it was unexpected and made my day! I loved this contest too :) Many thanks and be blessed sweet Line! :) Luloo

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