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The Mortal Potter

All will pass away
Test of time lay unendured
Potter too is clay
12/19/2014 Contest: East Jesus Sponsor: Roy Jerden

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Date: 5/26/2015 5:00:00 PM
interesting haiku
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Date: 1/3/2015 8:54:00 PM
Brilliant write Arlene! Congrats on huge win!
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Date: 1/3/2015 5:55:00 AM
Congrats on the the win with this fine take on the theme, Arlene
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Date: 1/2/2015 11:38:00 AM
Strong Haiku is a winner.. Congrats!
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Date: 1/2/2015 10:57:00 AM
Lovely haiku with a strong ending and worthy message. Congrats on your fine win, Arlene! // paul
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Date: 1/2/2015 10:53:00 AM
You are simply superb,congrats on the win...huggs
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Date: 1/2/2015 10:24:00 AM
a beautiful haiku many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/29/2014 1:46:00 PM
A magnificent little gem. Powerful last line.
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Date: 12/21/2014 6:57:00 PM
Time is all that will ever last. No matter how many pots are cast. God above with all his love. Is what mankind must hold steadfast. Peace. :)
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Arlene Smith
Date: 12/21/2014 8:55:00 PM
Peace to you, dear friend...
Date: 12/20/2014 10:10:00 PM
The last line made this poem spectacular!
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Date: 12/20/2014 2:30:00 PM
very interesting last line. Potter too is clay!! Enjoyed this one, arlene.
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Date: 12/20/2014 7:40:00 AM
Great images to draw a pen picture, Arlene
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Date: 12/20/2014 6:58:00 AM
- Hey ...a great haiku !.... a Christmas smile to you - I wish you and your family a peaceful and lovely Christmas, Arlene :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/20/2014 3:49:00 AM
Very beautiful haiku Arlene! Truly enjoyed it dear friend. I wish you a very Merry Christmas and your family! Have a very nice weekend. :) Love and hugs! xxx D.
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