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The Mortal Potter

All will pass away
Test of time lay unendured
Potter too is clay



12/19/2014
Contest: East Jesus
Sponsor: Roy Jerden

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Skat A

May 26, 2015 at 5:00 PM

interesting haiku

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

January 3, 2015 at 8:54 PM

Brilliant write Arlene! Congrats on huge win!

Dr.Ram Mehta

January 3, 2015 at 5:55 AM

Congrats on the the win with this fine take on the theme, Arlene

Paul Callus

January 2, 2015 at 10:57 AM

Lovely haiku with a strong ending and worthy message. Congrats on your fine win, Arlene! // paul

Kayod5 Kayode

January 2, 2015 at 10:53 AM

You are simply superb,congrats on the win...huggs

Jan Allison

January 2, 2015 at 10:24 AM

a beautiful haiku many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Monterey Sirak

December 29, 2014 at 1:46 PM

A magnificent little gem. Powerful last line.

Robert Johnson

December 21, 2014 at 6:57 PM

Time is all that will ever last. No matter how many pots are cast. God above with all his love. Is what mankind must hold steadfast. Peace. :)

Arlene Smith

December 21, 2014 at 8:55 PM

Peace to you, dear friend...

Andrea Dietrich

December 20, 2014 at 2:30 PM

very interesting last line. Potter too is clay!! Enjoyed this one, arlene.

Dr.Ram Mehta

December 20, 2014 at 7:40 AM

Great images to draw a pen picture, Arlene

Anne-Lise Andresen

December 20, 2014 at 6:58 AM

- Hey ...a great haiku !.... a Christmas smile to you - I wish you and your family a peaceful and lovely Christmas, Arlene :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter

December 20, 2014 at 3:49 AM

Very beautiful haiku Arlene! Truly enjoyed it dear friend. I wish you a very Merry Christmas and your family! Have a very nice weekend. :) Love and hugs! xxx D.

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