The Morning Sunbeam

the sunbeams shedding
jets of pinks on the hilltop
the clouds rush into
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Murray Avatar
April 21, 2018 at 5:44 PM
I see the jet streams pink in the setting sun Probir. What a beautiful view.
Gupta Avatar
April 21, 2018 at 10:58 PM
I envy your vision, Jean ! ... Thank you ...
Onclaud Avatar
April 21, 2018 at 5:03 PM
lovely images you paint, probir... huggs
Gupta Avatar
April 21, 2018 at 10:57 PM
When you like, it has to rain about which Victor wonders ... Thank you so much ...
Pigeon Tart Avatar
April 20, 2018 at 10:28 PM
Splendid imagery Probir! A lovely haiku. xomo!
Gupta Avatar
April 21, 2018 at 9:14 AM
Thank you, Maureen ...
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