The Morning of the Hurricanes Part 2

 Continued from Part 1 

The Beggars ’neath the balustrades,
and broken Children, Chambermaids,
are running wild from wraiths, afraid
	of dreams where death redoubles.
They fritter time with tattered threads
(from ragged clothes they’ve left in shreds),
crocheting hoods to hide their heads
	and faces, full of rubble.
But many things will not remain
the Morning of the Hurricanes,
when goblets filled with cool champagne
	evaporate in bubbles.

The White-Robed Maid adorns the trash
with charnel urns awash in ash,
then fumbles with an untied sash
	while pacing in the Palace.
Her hopes congeal in coffee spoons
with memories adrift in dunes;
yet, still she smiles with teeth like prunes
	and lips of painted callus.
And long before the midnight drains,
the Saviour wakes, the Loser gains,
the waters of the Hurricanes
	will fill her empty chalice.

The storm (behind the clarinets,
the silver flutes, the castanets,
the foghorns belching in quartets,
            the bagpipes, puffed and swollen)
is keeping time to tambourines
while Tom Thumb and the Four-Inch Queen,
pick up the shards and smithereens
            of moments lost or stolen.
They’re trekking through the Dim Domains
(where fountains weep, the mountain wanes), 
yet can’t escape the Hurricanes
            with trundling eyes patrollin’.

The Crowds (arrayed in jewels) in jails,
stoop, peering through a fence of nails
while light behind their eyeballs pales
	with plastic flame that sputters.
They huddle there because they must
(with eyelids hung like peeling rust,
their tears, palled pellets in the dust),
	behind the bolted shutters.
They’ll reawake without their pains
the Morning of the Hurricanes,
without their sores, without their stains,
their agonies will fill the drains
	and overflow the gutters.


 End 
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Kendrick Avatar
November 16, 2012 at 9:20 AM
Enjoyed this one..It has such power, flow, and rhythm to it..I am glad that I chose this one to read this morn..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara
Rzhepishevska Avatar
October 25, 2012 at 11:19 PM
It's just awesome! Love it so much. Best wishes, Larisa
Wesley Avatar
October 23, 2012 at 1:50 PM
Digestion has taken on new meaning. Will read this many times and find amazing new messages every time. Wonderful rendering of hurricanes and surrounding action.
Majumdar Avatar
October 22, 2012 at 1:26 PM
So many thoughts coelesce in your rhymes; it's just mind blowing.
Collins Avatar
October 19, 2012 at 9:19 AM
Man Terry! I am folded over and over, again and again in your hurricane of frightening delight. One image outdoes the previous. How do you find the twist of words, the pictures of desperation, the futility of the status quo and make them sing without an acoustic guitar? Hurricane Terry has hit land. love, Kathy
Cavanaugh Avatar
October 19, 2012 at 8:47 AM
Incredible poem here Terry. You always write such awesome poems. Bravo!
Burd Avatar
October 18, 2012 at 5:46 PM
P.S. this is one of the best compositions I've read since joing PS about a week ago
Burd Avatar
October 18, 2012 at 5:45 PM
I agree with Ilene. It has shades of a song by Dylan or the Police. Your descriptions are so deep. Excellent!
Bauer Avatar
October 18, 2012 at 4:28 PM
all i can say is one word - WOW!!!!! this is a masterpiece and deserves a few rereadings. you should feel very proud of yourself, my friend!
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