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The Morning of the Concrete Sun

The morning that my true love died there rose a concrete sun The clouds were stones as were my bones and my heart weighed a ton

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Date: 1/10/2022 2:02:00 PM
Beautifully penned rhyme but I hope you have not lost your love. :) Paulette
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Date: 1/10/2022 2:30:00 PM
Truly, she has flown.

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