The Morning After

My heart is bleeding
My soul is pleading
For the love that I once knew.
My mind is wondering
My thoughts are crumbling
Remembering how we grew and grew
My love for you will not go
My spirit feels so low
I try to remember the good 
But I will never have understood
How this ended so quickly 
I was out of your life so briskly
I just thought we would never part
and now I have a broken heart
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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A  Avatar
February 15, 2015 at 9:23 AM
Andy,:) Congratulations on having your awesome poem featured on the soups Home Page. Hope you had a wonderful Valentines day. ~SKAT LOVE~
Davies Avatar
May 31, 2026 at 12:53 PM
I know it's been a long time, but thank you so much
Rios Avatar
February 10, 2015 at 3:28 PM
I sometimes feel that way well done
Davies Avatar
May 31, 2026 at 12:53 PM
Thank you for your kind words
Sadig El Waad Avatar
February 10, 2015 at 2:52 AM
Very inspiring well-constructed poem I start with this morning!But pour guérir le mal de l'amour il n'y a que l'amour as the arab saying goes.
A   Avatar
January 31, 2015 at 2:50 AM
Andy, thank you for the reply... LINDA
Davies Avatar
May 31, 2026 at 12:57 PM
You're most welcome
A   Avatar
January 31, 2015 at 1:25 AM
Andy, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) This is a great way to start the New Year. Lucky Us, To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends! @-> LINDA <-@
Davies Avatar
January 31, 2015 at 2:45 AM
Hi Linda. Thank you so much for your lovely warm welcome. I have always loved expressing myself through art and music. Now to try poetry. Thank you once again Andy
A  Avatar
January 31, 2015 at 1:00 AM
Andy, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poet's around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
Andresen Avatar
January 30, 2015 at 7:20 AM
- Always remember the good memories ..... although the day is a little gray :) - A great poem, Andy - Welcome to P-Soup! - // Anne-Lise :)
Davies Avatar
January 30, 2015 at 6:53 PM
Hi Anne You are so so correct and thank you so much for your kind words Andy
Bocsa Avatar
January 30, 2015 at 5:54 AM
"A grande amore e un grande amore": understood or not love that was kept in the hand let deep paths.Look in your palm and see the love line/Impressive verses of a real gifted person.
Davies Avatar
January 30, 2015 at 6:55 PM
So beautifully expressed by an obviously very spiritual and talented man. Thank you
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