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The morning after

My heart is bleeding
My soul is pleading
For the love that I once knew.
My mind is wondering
My thoughts are crumbling
Remembering how we grew and grew
My love for you will not go
My spirit feels so low
I try to remember the good 
But I will never have understood
How this ended so quickly 
I was out of your life so briskly
I just thought we would never part
and now I have a broken heart

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/15/2015 9:23:00 AM
Andy,:) Congratulations on having your awesome poem featured on the soups Home Page. Hope you had a wonderful Valentines day. ~SKAT LOVE~
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Date: 2/10/2015 3:28:00 PM
I sometimes feel that way well done
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Date: 2/10/2015 2:52:00 AM
Very inspiring well-constructed poem I start with this morning!But pour guérir le mal de l'amour il n'y a que l'amour as the arab saying goes.
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Date: 2/1/2015 8:55:00 PM
Hi Andy.. powerful, well constructed write, my friend. Poetry Soup is an awesome place to display your creative, artist works. It's also an ideal place to meet and be shaped by other gifted poets. Comment on their works and they will comment on yours. Give one of the Contest a try as well. I look forward to reading more of your good writes in February. Please take time to check me out, ok!
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Date: 1/31/2015 2:50:00 AM
Andy, thank you for the reply... LINDA
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Date: 1/31/2015 1:25:00 AM
Andy, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) This is a great way to start the New Year. Lucky Us, To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends! @-> LINDA <-@
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Andy Davies
Date: 1/31/2015 2:45:00 AM
Hi Linda. Thank you so much for your lovely warm welcome. I have always loved expressing myself through art and music. Now to try poetry. Thank you once again Andy
Date: 1/31/2015 1:00:00 AM
Andy, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poet's around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 1/30/2015 7:20:00 AM
- Always remember the good memories ..... although the day is a little gray :) - A great poem, Andy - Welcome to P-Soup! - // Anne-Lise :)
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Andy Davies
Date: 1/30/2015 6:53:00 PM
Hi Anne You are so so correct and thank you so much for your kind words Andy
Date: 1/30/2015 5:54:00 AM
"A grande amore e un grande amore": understood or not love that was kept in the hand let deep paths.Look in your palm and see the love line/Impressive verses of a real gifted person.
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Andy Davies
Date: 1/30/2015 6:55:00 PM
So beautifully expressed by an obviously very spiritual and talented man. Thank you