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The Moon's Last Letter

There are only two things that all of you see.
There is the life-giving sun.  There is me.
The sun gives energy.  The sun grows food,
but 'tis I, that puts you in the mood.
The sun makes a flower, and I make a tune.
By now, have you guessed I'm the moon?

The shimmering light I shine is not my own. 
It's Sol's reflection that you are shone,
Yet, this sleight of hand, from the sky above,
makes men and women fall in love. 
So, love me in return.  Don't let me be misread,
and where all people go, let it always be said, 
"From every mountain peak and crater,
the moon is an honest manipulator".

I've been around since the earliest times.
So many couples sit there and stare.  
If you gave me 10 cents, I'd be rich from the dimes
from each time "he" would brush back "her" hair, 
as I treat them to a heavenly bliss, 
and he silently leans in for a kiss. 

Yes, I've been here since the earliest ages, 
attending to his and her spiritual needs. 
When poems were on lips, not yet on pages,
where his eyes, her eyes, by moonlight would read.   

Listen, earth's children, though it may be a shock,
I've grown lonely. I'm old.  I'm beginning to tire,
and to confess, I'm a humongous dark rock.
You'll have to make do with the sun's glowing fire. 

I have but a cold heart of iron and stone. 
So, lover, so poet, put away your pen. 
I'm out here floating in space all alone.  
Goodbye.  You won't see me.  I shan't rise again.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Wolf Avatar
September 5, 2026 at 10:47 PM
Another WOW! You've made the moon come alive in a singular way --- even it is a cold-hearted piece of rock and stone. Kudos!! :) gw
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
September 3, 2026 at 6:01 AM
This is a wonderfully captivating poem. The personification of the moon is executed beautifully, perfectly contrasting the sun's practical, life-giving utility with the moon's romantic influence. The conversational yet structured rhyme scheme carries the narrative effortlessly—moving from the charming observations of lovers through the centuries right down to the surprisingly poignant and melancholic conclusion. The description of the moon as an "honest manipulator" is a particularly brilliant and memorable touch. A deeply moving and imaginative piece!🌚🌝🌜🌛
Crandall Avatar
September 6, 2026 at 8:00 PM
Thanks, Alison! I'm glad you enjoyed my personification of the roles played by the sun and moon. I give credit to Ink for the part about the moon being an honest manipulator!
Rodgers Avatar
September 3, 2026 at 5:58 AM
Hello David, a charming and bittersweet moon‑monologue. I think you give the moon your Davidian playful confidence at first, the honest manipulator, the matchmaker, and then you let it age right in front of us, turning lonely, tired, almost tender in its confession. That last stanza hits hard… the moon stepping back from the sky like an old friend saying goodbye. Really lovely work, full of feeling and imagination. Blessings, Daniel
Crandall Avatar
September 6, 2026 at 7:57 PM
Hi Daniel, thanks! yep, I didn't really plan this poem, but it does seem like it kind of aged through the poem, just as you mentioned, and the last stanza is a bit abrupt.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 3, 2026 at 4:17 AM
It's Sol's reflection that you are shone…clever line! Oh, that last verse would break hearts. To think it is only recent history where we know the moon has no light of its own, yet how much light did it bring to lovers. 🌙
Crandall Avatar
September 6, 2026 at 7:53 PM
Thanks Kim! Yep, luckily, I don't think the real moon is as flaky as the one in this poem. You got me thinking about how folks probably didn't used to know that the moon only reflects the sun's light. That's probably true for the average guy next door, but I bet some "enlightened" types like Archimedes probably knew - I'm guessing that.
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