The Moonlight In Your Eyes

It's the moonlight in your eyes gives me a rush
Gazing at you,you're a landscape deep and lush

I will always want to spin this dance with you
In my world the sun rises and sets with you

When I met you I was teetering on the edge
Of dismay,but then you talked me off the ledge

No more fear or darkness swirls around me now
You have rescued me and brought me light somehow

I will always be so grateful for your heart
From your world of joy I never want to part

Yes,the moonlight in your eyes has captured me
I am yours and yet I never felt so free
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Chappell Avatar
November 20, 2010 at 8:57 AM
wow strong write here my friend
Dietrich Avatar
November 1, 2010 at 10:35 PM
c ool idea, the moonlight in your eyes. I really like that! well, see ya later, Deb. LUv, Andrea
Onclaud Avatar
November 1, 2010 at 2:58 AM
Smoking, sparking piece with freat romantic wrod tempo.. love this, deb! hope to see you again in my pages.. warmest, nette
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