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For  If I Could I Would Fetch You The Moon On A Spoon Poetry Contest


Sponsored by: Kai Michael Neumann 

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look at the obsidian sky of night it hasn't even a hint of light I tell you - Dear away the stars have flown and Luna has abandoned her magic throne moon and stars can’t match the glow of your eyes and even if this poet tells you lies believe if you can that what I say is true the moon on a spoon I have fetched for you

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Date: 3/13/2025 10:58:00 PM
Gorgeous! What an ending - <3
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Date: 3/12/2025 6:18:00 PM
Andrea, you summarize love's affection with some potent words! Seems to fit well with the last line. You do rise like the moon to this challenge!
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Date: 3/6/2025 10:53:00 AM
Andrea I Love your poem, so genuine and sentimental. Good luck in the contest. Blessings and hugs, Jenny.
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Date: 3/6/2025 8:00:00 AM
How beautiful and so romantic! Ah! I love how youv used the prompt line there! Creative! Best wishes sweet Andrea
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Date: 3/6/2025 6:36:00 AM
Aw, so sweet :)
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Date: 3/5/2025 10:51:00 PM
Sweet:)
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Date: 3/5/2025 8:32:00 PM
A sense of deep affection and devotion very nicely expressed in the poem Wish the best .
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Date: 3/5/2025 1:20:00 PM
What a lovely write you have here. "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a wonderful day writing away.............
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