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For  If I Could I Would Fetch You The Moon On A Spoon Poetry Contest


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the moon on a spoon

look at the obsidian sky of night
            it hasn't even a hint of light
I tell you - Dear
           away the stars have flown
   and Luna has abandoned 
                        her magic throne

moon and stars can’t match
                          the glow of your eyes
and even if this poet tells you lies
         believe if you can that what I say is true
   the moon on a spoon 
                          I have fetched for you
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Hind Avatar
March 13, 2025 at 10:58 PM
Gorgeous! What an ending - <3
Beaufort Avatar
March 12, 2025 at 6:18 PM
Andrea, you summarize love's affection with some potent words! Seems to fit well with the last line. You do rise like the moon to this challenge!
Proxenos Avatar
March 6, 2025 at 10:53 AM
Andrea I Love your poem, so genuine and sentimental. Good luck in the contest. Blessings and hugs, Jenny.
Empress Avatar
March 6, 2025 at 8:00 AM
How beautiful and so romantic! Ah! I love how youv used the prompt line there! Creative! Best wishes sweet Andrea
Legros Kelley Avatar
March 6, 2025 at 6:36 AM
Aw, so sweet :)
Daniel Avatar
March 5, 2025 at 10:51 PM
Sweet:)
Singh Avatar
March 5, 2025 at 8:32 PM
A sense of deep affection and devotion very nicely expressed in the poem Wish the best .
Goldsmith Avatar
March 5, 2025 at 1:20 PM
What a lovely write you have here. "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a wonderful day writing away.............
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