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The Moon Is Hidden Somewhere In the Clouds

The clouds are dark, And scary, Not a single star is twinkling, The sky looks dense and without any glitters! The clouds and the moon are lark, Although its very dark! Frequent moving clouds.. As if its a race! And the moon is hides itself, Somewhere in between the clouds! The moon is in a playful mood, Playing hide and seek, Taking full pleasures, Of the dense clouds. Yet its brightness cannot be hidden, The light penetrates through the clouds, All its trials.. were a vain effort! The scenery is photogenic, Worth to be captured, Its eye catching and magnificent! The gibbous phase of moon, is enhancing its beauty. Duskier the clouds, Shimmering were it looks. It may be our urge, To see the ray of light in the dullness, That made the moon looks- The brightest and the best!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/21/2011 1:49:00 PM
I loved the emotions conveyed as you describe the different images in the sky. Good eye! Great poem!
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Date: 7/20/2011 7:29:00 PM
Very lovely expressions , Roshani
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Roshni Sharma
Date: 7/21/2011 2:19:00 AM
Thanks sir for this appreciation.
Date: 7/20/2011 6:26:00 PM
enjoyed your view of the sky and moon....stop and read my thoughts if you dare....I scare myself sometimes.
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Date: 7/20/2011 6:05:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup... enjoy the site with its many features as u continue to share creative poetry as this brilliant beauty with luv..
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Roshni Sharma
Date: 7/21/2011 3:12:00 AM
thanks..i would appreciate your contradictions since i don't consider myself as a poet and these are my 1st few poems..
Date: 7/20/2011 1:11:00 PM
The cloud will pass and suddenly the gibbous moon will be free to shower you with its cool incandescent illumination.A good poem; it makes me want to move out and meditate
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Roshni Sharma
Date: 7/21/2011 3:16:00 AM
Thanks.. but i would love to know your critical views too..since this my beginning. i wanna improve..
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Roshni Sharma
Date: 7/21/2011 3:16:00 AM
Thanks.. but i would love to know your critical views too..since this my beginning. i wanna improve..
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Roshni Sharma
Date: 7/21/2011 3:16:00 AM
Thanks.. but i would love to know your critical views too..since this my beginning. i wanna improve..
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Roshni Sharma
Date: 7/21/2011 3:16:00 AM
Thanks.. but i would love to know your critical views too..since this my beginning. i wanna improve..
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Roshni Sharma
Date: 7/21/2011 3:16:00 AM
Thanks.. but i would love to know your critical views too..since this my beginning. i wanna improve..
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Roshni Sharma
Date: 7/21/2011 3:16:00 AM
Thanks.. but i would love to know your critical views too..since this my beginning. i wanna improve..

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