The Moon Is Glowing

the moon is glowing
and a summer fish twitches 
to console my soul
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Hickman Avatar
September 30, 2009 at 11:14 PM
a very delicate and delightful Haiku and welcome to the soup it is my pleasure to read your words,,blessings..Cecil
Guzzi Avatar
September 21, 2009 at 8:19 PM
odd odd imagery....when I see a fish twitch it's usually dead?..Light & Love
Mason Avatar
July 23, 2009 at 2:27 PM
Awesome haiku here, Otsenre !! Welcome to PoetrySoup ... I hope to read lots more of your writing!
Spence Sr Avatar
July 8, 2009 at 6:54 AM
This is an excellent haiku. I can see the imagery quite clearly. This is such a splendid view of tranquility. Great job! ~Joseph
Goff Avatar
June 30, 2009 at 8:36 PM
this is awesome! Otsenre! jim
Mason Avatar
June 27, 2009 at 11:37 AM
Awesome!! Have you put this in Raul's nature contest? Its a winner for sure ... smile ...
Keogh Jr. Avatar
June 17, 2009 at 3:00 PM
It is so unique and even outre an image that I just have to give this a seven. Thank you for your kind words about my poetry entry. They are very much appreciated. Regards, GK
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