The Moon

In night’s loneliness
The moon whispered to me gently
Let’s play hide-and-seek

So I closed my eyes
Counted from one up to ten
The moon’s gone, I cried
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Andresen Avatar
February 3, 2018 at 2:33 PM
- It comes back, do not cry Vanne - The moon will always follow you on the road :) - A great touching poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Joe Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 12:12 AM
Thanks for the sweet words Sunshine. Well-appreciated!
Gentile Avatar
January 18, 2018 at 3:05 PM
I hope you find your moon, Vanna, Lovely poem !!
Joe Avatar
January 19, 2018 at 12:04 AM
Thanks for the compliments Mike.
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