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The Moon

The summer passed so fast I thought you and I would never last You told me our memories won’t be just a blast Ever was I the one to doubt our past. Clouds were soon hiding the sun The difficult hadn’t even yet begun I saw your shadow everywhere I went I guess that’s just how much you meant. But even in the darkest hour The moon was there-a source of power And each look made you feel so near A dream to chase the presence of my fear…

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/6/2013 10:14:00 PM

the moon, is a very rich first poem...Gergana Skywalker, HI! i'm taking it upon myself to enjoy every poem you post on this site from here on... please add more poetry to your list..I enjoyed this poem in which is the only one on the soup.... always~ LINDA

Gergana Skywalker
Date: 1/8/2013 2:09:00 PM

Hello!Thank you very much,Linda! :) It's always really nice when you hear that someone enjoyed a part of you.I hope you'll like the next ones too! Thank you again for your comment! :)

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/5/2013 3:59:00 PM

Welcome to poetry Soup, an interesting write. Light & Love

Gergana Skywalker
Date: 1/8/2013 2:10:00 PM

Thank you! :) I am only a beginner but it's always nice to know if I am on the right track with a piece. :)

Gergana Skywalker

Date: 12/25/2012 9:29:00 AM

I'd love to see thoughts and critics if someone would dare. :D

Gergana Skywalker
Date: 1/8/2013 2:12:00 PM

I appreciate the thoughts.:) I'd love to have some suggestions on the editing!If you have some ideas,please let me know! :) And thanks again for the honesty expressed in a gentle way. :)

Rodger Cunningham
Date: 12/26/2012 11:11:00 AM

Every poem like the person who wrote it is unique. Just as grooming can enhance a person's looks, editing can make a poem shine.RWC