Gergana Skywalker Poet Ballad

The Moon

The summer passed so fast
I thought you and I would never last
You told me our memories won’t be just a blast
Ever was I the one to doubt our past.

Clouds were soon hiding the sun
The difficult hadn’t even yet begun
I saw your shadow everywhere I went
I guess that’s just how much you meant.

But even in the darkest hour
The moon was there-a source of power
And each look made you feel so near
A dream to chase the presence of my fear…

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Poet Destroyer A January 6, 2013 at 10:14 PM the moon, is a very rich first poem...Gergana Skywalker, HI! i'm taking it upon myself to enjoy every poem you post on this site from here on... please add more poetry to your list..I enjoyed this poem in which is the only one on the soup.... always~ LINDA Gergana Skywalker January 8, 2013 at 2:09 PM Hello!Thank you very much,Linda! :) It's always really nice when you hear that someone enjoyed a part of you.I hope you'll like the next ones too! Thank you again for your comment! :)

Debbie Guzzi January 5, 2013 at 3:59 PM Welcome to poetry Soup, an interesting write. Light & Love Gergana Skywalker January 8, 2013 at 2:10 PM Thank you! :) I am only a beginner but it's always nice to know if I am on the right track with a piece. :)

Gergana Skywalker December 25, 2012 at 9:29 AM I'd love to see thoughts and critics if someone would dare. :D Gergana Skywalker January 8, 2013 at 2:12 PM I appreciate the thoughts.:) I'd love to have some suggestions on the editing!If you have some ideas,please let me know! :) And thanks again for the honesty expressed in a gentle way. :) Rodger Cunningham December 26, 2012 at 11:11 AM Every poem like the person who wrote it is unique. Just as grooming can enhance a person's looks, editing can make a poem shine.RWC