Mustapha Mohammed Poet Rhyme

The Monster Inside

There are darksome days
Those storms we all must ride
But the greatest storm of all
Is the monster tucked inside.

It brings out the worst in you
When sullen days would creep
Its like a raging storm reposing
In a gladsome heart so deep. 

Only in moments to come alive
When emotions tough  are grind
But its hard to tame the fires
Of a proud and monstrous mind.

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Liam Mcdaid September 13, 2013 at 10:15 AM YOU BROUGHT THE MONSTER OUT DRAWING BEAUTIFUL PIECE

Danesh Morgan August 31, 2013 at 1:02 AM It does sound like the Incredible Hulk! soft mannered turn into a monster! lol s nice one M.M

Richard Lamoureux August 29, 2013 at 7:27 PM I enjoyed reading the poem and the comments. We all have our monsters to battle. Well presented and thought provoking piece.

Duke Beaufort August 6, 2013 at 7:05 PM I do believe it stems from the way life evolved on this planet. Emotions are wonderful if we can deal with them sanely. I often wonder why some people seem vicious for no reason--the 1%. Then, I also understand why others are hurt and angry. All in all, the anger out there is a message that is telling those who will listen that the world should be a better place for the 99%. Your poem is elegant.

Debbie Duncan June 23, 2013 at 8:11 AM nice write, I have one called Monsters. that's what caught my attention ;} Mustapha Mohammed July 5, 2013 at 6:14 PM Thank you Debbie for your kind comment.

Nette Onclaud June 16, 2013 at 3:23 AM this is a gripping piece well told with images that raises the senses' moods... wonderful, mus!..:) huggs Mustapha Mohammed July 5, 2013 at 6:12 PM Thank you dear Nette.Warm hugs.

Mv Venkataraman June 16, 2013 at 2:04 AM Lovely brief poem giving admonition, superbly penned of course, I love it for the meaning, And thank it for the revelation mvvenkataraman Mustapha Mohammed July 5, 2013 at 6:10 PM Thanks for your lovely comment bud.