The Moment's Arrived

Your ship has come in 
    the moment's arrived
  No need to dream of
    gold nuggets to thrive  

  The moment is now
    time ticks, tucks it away
  Reach out and grasp her
    no more comes she today
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Rodrigues Avatar
June 18, 2023 at 11:47 AM
When she arrives, know it and don’t look for more…enough is enough!
Wolf Avatar
June 19, 2023 at 7:26 PM
Right. Unfortunately, we hesitate --- and, yes, all is lost!
Messina Avatar
June 17, 2023 at 3:46 AM
Can't let a golden opportunity slip away. And as for the golden nuggets...I'll settle for a winner lottery ticket (lol) Hope all is well :)
Wolf Avatar
June 19, 2023 at 7:27 PM
Me, too. Anyway, I'll need one of those lottery winners, if I grab her. Woman, thy inclination from birth is SPEND, SPEND, SPEND -- and we're not talkin' time, are we, Charlie. lol.
M  Avatar
June 16, 2023 at 8:45 AM
The moments arrived….so grasp it! Great message and poem BB….Debx
Gentile Avatar
June 16, 2023 at 4:32 AM
I love the message here GW as well as the way in which you constructed it!! I enjoy your mind and its quirks! Happy Friday!!
Wolf Avatar
June 19, 2023 at 7:33 PM
Quirks? In my mind? Wherever could they be?! ~ Smirks and Smurfs
Tor Avatar
June 16, 2023 at 2:40 AM
Opportunities may only come once in a lifetime cease the moment and make your move... Lovely Gershon
Hawkins Avatar
June 15, 2023 at 8:08 PM
Or you will miss the boat. Another clever rhyme, Thank you, Gershon.
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