The Moment of Choice

In unison, stars
wink and hum, "you'll never see
us clearly through tears"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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September 19, 2008 at 6:13 PM
Nice use of personification to forward your thoughts in this poem. I like the idea of winking stars. Thank you for sharing your creativity with us. Best wishes with your writing. karen
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