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The Moment of Choice

In unison, stars wink and hum, "you'll never see us clearly through tears"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 9/19/2008 6:13:00 PM
Nice use of personification to forward your thoughts in this poem. I like the idea of winking stars. Thank you for sharing your creativity with us. Best wishes with your writing. karen
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