The Moment I Never Forgot You

The whole neighborhood was silent,
silent enough that you can only hear the crickets chirping. 
It was getting dark outside.
I ran to my bedroom window. 
Slowly gazing across the midnight sky. 
Dangling from up above were millions of dewdrops of stars casting bright glows.
Only one star caught my eye,
it was luminous and enchanting and it was like the queen of the universe.
I knew it was a special star.
It reminds me of my dog Cindy. 
We had great times together, playing fetch and hide and seek. 

But this time it was something worse, 
worse than any bad memory I had,
or a sore throat I get when I didn't put my jacket on,
a kind of feeling I get when I hate a book I read,
an unforgettable rumor that was made about me,
a day that it rains. 
You tell me it is too late to remember the great times I had with Cindy,
but that is because Cindy is gone.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 2/22/2020 10:02:00 PM
I love your description of the night great imagery. One star to remind you of someone very special; it is never to late. Hugs Eve
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Nathasha Thalpaguruge
Date: 2/23/2020 7:36:00 PM
Thanks!
Date: 2/26/2018 8:16:00 AM
oh wow, deep! great poem and welcome, I see you are new here. You will love it! ;)-luloo
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Nathasha Thalpaguruge
Date: 3/2/2018 4:24:00 PM
Thank You, Laura Loo, and yes I am new here thank you for commenting on my poem.
Date: 2/20/2018 5:34:00 PM
wow, you turned it into a painful memory of having to lose her. That was really clever, Natasha. I see you are new here. Nice to meet you. I enjoyed seeing your first poem posted here. How the heck did you end up seeing my old Huck poem??
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Nathasha Thalpaguruge
Date: 2/21/2018 8:16:00 AM
Thanks, Andrea it was a pleasure to meet you. I have been following you ever since I came to Poetry Soup. I loved your poems but I don't know how I got to your Huck poem. I see that you are the best all-time poet so I decided to read your poems too. But I am not the best at poems really. I get a little floaty but wish you all the best.
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