The Moment

Why does it feel so right?
The moment that i looked in your eyes
There was an electricity between us
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
August 27, 2010 at 2:48 PM
Nice romantic one. nice seeing your little senryu collection today. LUv, Andrea
Mehta Avatar
August 6, 2010 at 5:48 AM
A nice crative write on The Moment, Kaila
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