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unrhymed couplets drawing the false god that lies needing human sacrifice 

There is a war on earth against God attacking the very corner stones within pillars of belief Shepherd when the stars of doom eclipse red faced cornered facts bleeding innocent the silent screams tremble Unheard angels filtering through the moonlight kneeling souls pray for His dire mercy To make this world right again filled with peace Condemn the guilty as wolves they are killing sheep Ripping little ones to pieces sacrificed at the pagan temple where the purity of love has been tarnished ugly by these loveless strays Savages impotent against the powers of nature prostrating the cringing submission of a slave Begging blind articles of self praise enslaved ideas removing independence from true facts not acknowledged for their value underneath respect Despite its wanton infliction of pain apes amongst rats devouring democratic views under heaven's command thou shalt not kill

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Date: 9/16/2018 7:33:00 AM
Hi Liam!:))Wow! Very powerful, excellent poem you've written here my dearest friend Liam.All so beautifully penned.So very true!But we know God wins in the end!The world all upside down!It breaks my heart to see all horrible, sad, evil acts done against God, people, all! All signs of Last Days according to the Bible, Liam.Prayers are very powerful, n' we need pray to God now more than ever for lost souls to accept Jesus.Another very beautiful sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen. Just awesome!A true glowing gem!Your pen is truly mighty golden!A Fav!Please, take good care of yourself!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything.Please keep positive n' very strong.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers,Liam.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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