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The Mistake of You

I never made a promise to stay in your life i never said that there would be sunshine in your life you always told me we were always meant to be now I sit alone just watching the T.V you always said that our love was as perfect as can be but then turned around and blamed all the mistakes on me I never promised that we could work it through but when it ended it's like you always knew (chorus) But we were so young when we said those things and i was so confused of what life should be i grew old and yes maybe even just a little bitter and i still trying to clean out all the past and it's litter you broke my heart and slowly shredded it apart I made mistakes and i will be the first to say Work in progress (just had to get it down somewhere its a song not very good, needs work)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/14/2010 12:48:00 PM
i disagree, i like it a grate deal Very clear message here. Love Roger
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Date: 6/14/2010 11:55:00 AM
Niceley done so far, keep it up chap. Regards, Gavin.
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Date: 6/13/2010 2:04:00 PM
a good working progress here,, can't wait to see it when it's finishes.. enjoyed..P.D.
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