The Missile

.. Jet stream like a missile Being launched in the clouds

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Lynette Chachere

Date: 3/25/2010 6:01:00 PM

That missile could be our meteor from space.but it can't be because you wrote in the clouds instead of from the clouds. unless the government is hiding something from us to desrtoy all.lol, you never know thsese days, people are beyond weird. Thank you for the devastating image, Sara. amazing as always.violence is never-ending if its war. -Always&Forever Lynette

John Trusty

Date: 3/25/2010 7:44:00 AM

Sara, this offering evoked a memory from 1954, the Cold War was raging and as I lay on my back in the front yard I saw my first "contrails" from a B52 Bomber. I thought it a missle from Russia and we were all going to be blown to smitherens. Thanks for taking me back all those many years ago.

Gert W. Knop

Date: 3/25/2010 7:36:00 AM

Nicely written Monoku, Sara! And tahnky for all your welcome comments...Gert

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 3/25/2010 5:47:00 AM

enjoyed mom,