The Mirror's Command

this morning the mirror showed me
my very own face
in the shape of a memory
in another time and place
                   suddenly the mirror filled
                   with a strange colored haze
                   hiding what was revealed
                   leaving me in a daze
I shook my head
must be hallucinating
should go back to bed
but this is just too fascinating
                  I never dropped acid
                  so this can't be a trip
                  the vision was so vivid
                  so I decided to dip
deep into my mind
for an explanation
an old dream I did find
when I gave into temptation
                 in the midst of the haze
                 the word follow did appear
                 I snapped out of my daze
                 and my path was clear
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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January 18, 2017 at 4:29 PM
This was deep and beautiful Christy. I love that thought, looking in the mirror and finding not only yourself but a memory, maybe it was the smile, maybe it caused the smile and maybe, just maybe it still does. Really nice my friend.
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