The Minotaur

In the tunnel, cobweb-stricken and dank, a rat skittered to and fro, hitting his shoe as if drunk. The cockroaches joined in, slicking the floor with a beetle-black sheen. Unable to keep his footing he slid to his knees and, cursing his misfortune, he cried out loud,"where the hell am I? God rid me of this mess!" as the roaches covered him with a shroud of wriggling toes and waggling antennae. He staggered to his feet, brushing off the bugs, and placed his hands flat against the wall, feeling his way to the only source of light, a flickering candle on a mat, sticky with melted wax. The light brought into view a huge oaken door. He could barely pull the door ajar, and when he did, he caught a sign thereon which read, 'Beware all ye who enter here.' "Aaargh!" he groaned, "what the hell have I gotten myself into now."

...to be continued
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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January 10, 2016 at 1:42 PM
Hopefully a barrel of rum is through the door. Love the detail as if you can feel the creepy craw lies smell the dampness. Kelli
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January 10, 2016 at 4:46 PM
That was my intention! Thanks so much! Keith
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January 9, 2016 at 6:34 PM
Can't wait to read the second part of this beautiful poem my friend , great write indeed , hugs/ / :) dalia
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January 9, 2016 at 7:36 PM
You are most kind! Thanks so much... Keith
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