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The Minister's Son

Once in a place on a top of a hill Lies an oak tree the stood there still Under that is a boy I know in pain All wet because of his tears and the rain. He swears he’ll never fall in love again No more heartache that happened back then But I do hope that he is wrong Cause my heart screams we both belong. He does not know I know the things he loves From what he hates and what he wants to have I know his favorite food, number, and song He does not know I had him memorized for so long. He loves things that the color is blue He loves to tease me but never will argue He loves to play basketball once a week or twice He loves to eat ham soaked in vinegar and rice. He loves places that are peaceful and quiet He wants things to work out like what he had set He is quiet and does not talk a lot He wears v-neckline shirts that make him look so hot. Nobody else knows what he does best Playing guitar is his greatest asset I know his hometown, where he came from And I love it when he plays the drums. Yes that guy is the one I love He’s the one that I have been dreaming of He’s my life, my love and no other than The man in black the minister’s son.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 8/18/2014 8:13:00 PM
Sam, thank you for the reply
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Date: 7/27/2014 5:52:00 PM
Sam, This happens to be an excellent poem, to have featured on the poetry soup's home page. Congratulations, enjoy having your poem featured this week. Always ~ LINDA ~
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Sam Tiwana
Date: 8/2/2014 5:29:00 AM
thanks Linda.... thanks for all the support and compliments.... it feels so good to find a friend here in PoetrySoup... thank you and God Bless!!! :)
Date: 7/25/2014 7:07:00 PM
Sam, ,, Thank you for the comment on my comment. I am looking forward, in hearing from you again. You will enjoy this site, I guaranteed or my fun poetry name isn't PD :) I highly recommend the blog area, there you can read what is hot, and what is going on here at The Poetry Soup. If you like click on some of the side features ((-UNDER- the area where it reads "Member Poets/Poems")) to the left of this comment. -That's my favorite soup section. If you scroll down to where it reads "Contests" you will enjoy the "Contest Winners: Member " feature. Click away, and check out what's cooking. Enjoy reading and following, many of the incoming winners. "I SURE DO." Please feel free to comment and read any of my poems, if you'd like. My poems are not the easiest to understand:) I'm still learning myself. However, I enjoy encouraging others. If you have any questions, feel free to ask. I might be able to help, if not I will recommend someone. Take Care~LINDA~
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Date: 7/25/2014 6:02:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Sam :) - I choose your first great written free verse - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/25/2014 4:45:00 AM
Welcome
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Date: 7/24/2014 9:23:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, Sam. I am glad you discovered this nice community of writers and hope you enjoy the site. Read the work of other poet's and comment if you find something you like; many poets will return the favor. Over time you will get to "know" some of us. You are welcome to visit my page anytime. Enjoy!
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Date: 7/23/2014 3:01:00 PM
Sam, a great poem, amazing and filled with love,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Sam Tiwana
Date: 7/24/2014 5:44:00 AM
Thank you so much!!!! I would love to join your contest... Thank you once again for appreciating my poem.... :) God Bless!!!

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