Notes About The Poem

THE OPEN ORGANIC FORM

The Mind Quieted

ultimate expressions
appear
   are they genuine
or
  no

perhaps
      a worship of false 
idols 
    these poems
                of my soul
once anonymous
now
     cast free
to drip
  within me
by day
      by night
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Merryman Avatar
July 14, 2021 at 7:10 AM
Brian, I enjoyed your poem! I like this form. Blessings, Kim M
Strand Avatar
July 14, 2021 at 2:44 PM
Thanks Kim,there is more interaction with an open form
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